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Her Cryptic Odeum

 

Clarion calls

in flumes of

milky mists.

 

Idle ebonies

ranged on

tousled blades.

 

-Lyrical

dreams of

phantom guests.-

 


Author notes

Prompt: Picture above
Credit: Auditorium for Souls by rosiehardy @ flickr
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  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    January 7

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    Nicely done. The entire poem depicts the mood of the prompt. The last line was brilliance. Congratulations on the gold.

    Mike


  • Walk-Free
    January 7

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    "-Lyrical
    dreams of
    phantom guests.- "

    beautiful. this simply took my breath away


  • maralisa silver member
    January 4

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    wow a brilliant take onthe promt I love your imagery and flow good luck inthe contestmaralisa


  • Joseph Hollis
    January 4

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    I love the title. This makes me think of a performance hall for lost souls, or an empty one. The girl is cursed to, eternally, perform for an audience of the damned. The end leads me to believe that this is all in her mind, though. Well done.

  • Bob Fox
    January 4

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    well poet

    So few words. So many empty feelings & such deep thoughts. Take a chair & share your wonderful mind.

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