Grace has taken the form of a young girl
Light is Its message and speaks through her mouth
Silence is Its language hiding in her colourful words
Radiance is Its nature expressed through her shining eyes
Beauty is Its reflection revealed through her gracious gestures
Simplicity is Its perfume infusing her actions
Love is Its song resounding through each pore of her skin
In reality, Grace and the young girl are nothing but one
Gratitude flows through our tears of joy
Author notes
option 2 : i would have never written this poem before joining ap, because i would have never met ellie.
In a list
A contest entry
- 4 making me who I am... by little-hug.
744 points, ended January 7, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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yay !!!
I am so happy for you that ellie has been touched by your poem, because it came from your heart ...
heartfelt congratulations on your much deserved silver trophy ...
marion -
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thank you again, dear maa, for your everlasting support.
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... Poetry really is a beautiful medicine. Reading this poem has made my heart soar into the sky so it is on top of the world! Thank you so much for this. I don't know quite what to say. I am speechless but I feel so lucky. Thank you!
Ellie
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thanks and love
thank you very much, dear ellie, for your kind message. yes indeed, poetry is a medicine, as soon as it brings us beyond the narrow limits of our ego. and thank you also for the silver trophee. we could say it only flattes our ego, but we could also say that it is a way for love to express itself. and love is the greatest healer.
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Oh My~
This is Precious and what a treat to read- I have missed You and Your other half who bring Light into this world~ Bless You both in this New Year-
to Marion for me please
I imagine little-hug smiling after reading Your words from the Heart~
touches deep- a Beauty of a Gem like her
Keep Your quill dancing~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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thank you for your blessings !
for you too, dear desire, a year of inner and outer accomplishment.
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I love the way you interpreted the option rule ... truly touching and truly true ...
it's amazing to see you pick up your cyber-pen again after such a long time and to write a tribute-poem for our ellie ... you see, she can move mountains like you !!!
gros bisou,
marionette
ps. do you like my new avatar ?
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a muse
thank you, dear marionette, for the constant inspiration you provide. you are a real muse!
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