Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Intospection

Sun's light sets aside
night's darkness,
but gloom inside me  stayed.
thousand brilliant stars shining
leave black spots in night sky.


exploding thoughs,
clouding clear vision,
I am groping for a way,
memories turning,
hurts, insults and setbacks.


I am struck in this black hole.

Author notes

12 lines or less

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    January 4
    Edit | Reply
    second stanza 'thoughts'

    Thanks for your entry.


  • maralisa silver member
    January 4
    Edit | Reply
    aw dad a very deep and sad poem full of strong emotions good luck inthe contestmaralisa