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Loose Ends



at it’s end_
I took the noose
and tied a bow

just to remember…
you’re not worth,
                  dying for



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  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    January 6
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    This is excellent ans worthy of the gold.

    Sue


  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 5

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    How strong can brevity be...let me see...here is living/written proof...excellent work...
    and no one is ever worth our lives...well maybe family...

    Thank you for entering.

    mystic


  • Naughtygrlred
    January 4
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    sick


  • suseann
    January 4
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    Dang strait! This is a quick wit piece


  • Rowan gold member
    January 4
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    Oh, wow. This is so damn good. Excellent.


  • Frozentearz
    January 4

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    Well Mally it may be short but it is ever so powerful within the wording, as Nicolette said great twist
    and a great way of taking a bad situation and making it pretty
    Thanks for sharing,
    Love and LIght
    Frozentearz


  • Nicolette gold member
    January 4

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    Oh what a great twist here! You are so good at writing short, powerful poems, Mal.

    ~ Nicolette

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