I'm alone,
i have no one,
no one to hug me,
to wipe away my tears,
to show me i'm loved,
nobody,
i'm just alone.
No one to show me how good life is,
no one to teach me new things,
no one to tell me i'm special,
no one to say they will always love me,
nobody,
i'm just alone.
That's all i'll ever be,
forgotten and unloved,
with no one there to hold me,
just me, myself and I,
nobody else,
i'm just alone.
A contest entry
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900 points, ended January 5, 124 entries
Honorable mention
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im just alone too
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no idea? =[
means you don't like to judge me
it's allright
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What is your thinking after getting me?
don't mark it 5 stars but reply
by
the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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no idea
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Sounds like you are in pain and feeling lonely.
Just try to be around those you love, hug them,
kiss them and let them know that you need that
too... there is nothing wrong asking for a big great
hug.... we all need that kind of affection
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Peace and love,
Fayfreire
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awwww this is so sad im so sorry, and you do sound alone
great poem
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you are everybody's rose here with their love, they always want to make you the happiest girl in the world
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Awe, this is so sad. You are never truly alone. You have friends who care and love you so very much. You may not have anyone to hug but their hugs of comfort and support is enough to make you smile. this is a very touching piece I really enjoyed reading this and I will always be here if you want someone to talk to. I can relate to this so well and thanks for sharing you are very talented
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SUCH SAD FEELINGS!!!
You have expressed yourself beautifully here my sweet daughter but I do pray you don't feel this way down deep for you do have ones here who truly care and will never leave you alone
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first of all great poem very sad second your not alone i will always be here for you right or wrong you do heres a hug from me to you now wipe away your tear thank you for sharing this wonderful poem i hope you dont really feel like this keep penning those poems and i will keep reading
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