Out in the forest,
No life around,
It is deforested,
I have found,
No animal’s alive,
Because of the lumberjacks,
Not even one had survived,
Creatures are dead now they can relax,
And are race,
Killed this forest,
What a disgrace,
Poor forest.
A contest entry
- Give Me Anything (PW Allowed) by swimmeroks.
900 points, ended January 6, 108 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think?
Comments
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i love the forest and the woods, and am also bothered by our loss of them. i wish more people cared. it is a disgrace, you've said it well. ty for the poem and welcome to ap


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thanks again for the nice comment
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Beautifully described.


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thanks for the comment
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I definately liked it. Not a bad write.
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