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Poor forest

Out in the forest,
No life around,
It is deforested,
I have found,
No animal’s alive,
Because of the lumberjacks,
Not even one had survived,
Creatures are dead now they can relax,
And are race,
Killed this forest,
What a disgrace,
Poor forest.

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  • friend
    January 10

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    i love the forest and the woods, and am also bothered by our loss of them. i wish more people cared. it is a disgrace, you've said it well. ty for the poem and welcome to ap


  • Lanasaur
    January 8
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    thanks again for the nice comment


  • Tqop
    January 8
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    Beautifully described.


  • Lanasaur
    January 6
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    thanks for the comment


  • swimmeroks
    January 5
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    I definately liked it. Not a bad write.

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