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2012 - The Haiku Remix

The last screaming day
fell into an infinite
silence of the lambs.

A contest entry

Give it to me dirty and cruel baby.

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  • Bruce silver member
    January 15
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    Well, I'm not sure I understand, but it sure sounds good - sort of like the Book of Revelations!


  • Kathraina silver member
    January 4
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    apocolypse anyone? lolz. great job on this piece, very well done.

    ♥ Kathraina