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If i made the world a better place!


I’d make bills not that hard to face,
I’d make people loving a real human race,
I’d stop all the violence,
I’d stop all the pain,
I’d listen to public ideas no silence,
I’d accept the weather sun or rain,
I’d make money not matter alot,
I’d make people care more about love,
I wouldn’t disguise,
All the lies,
I’d speak truth always,
I’d tell others to money doesn’t get you everything,
Love is priceless it doesn’t pay.

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 4

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    lovely piece

    so true in all cases, money just makes us greedier, love is a treasure never to mistreat! thank you for this entry...good luck...
    Sparks


  • MichaelBe
    January 4
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    very nice
    im sure the world would indeed be a much better place

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    January 4

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    Filled with wisdom and courage. Words the earth should hear and know more often. I love this.
    Thanks for sharing.
    Brian