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Mentioning Inventions...

We think in this advanced glorious age

Life is more simple on our earthly stage

We have gadgets, appliances for this and that

Making jobs easier in no time flat!

But what we forget is that all need maintaining

We scratch our head ....For the explaining

Everything that works, it needs the tending

So the more that we have to work, service needs rending!

Author notes

Have we got so advanced that we make life easier?

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    January 16

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    I love the truth in these lines, today's gadgets aren't always what they're made out to be, having said that where would we be without them. Well done. Best to you in the contest


  • Lady Michaella
    January 15
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    this is a great poem, full of knowledge and truth. i love your use of rhyme, its excellent.
    xx


  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 10
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    So true

    In the gadgets today and for what we pay for them they should come with a repair person should they fail for we have far too much going in our trash pits thats junk because the world just tosses them and gets another piece of junk .Sad it is for if we made what we needed right here in the usa we wouldnt build junk therefore look at the millions we could save


  • Desire gold member
    January 4
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    Oy~

    I must come back to inhale
    for the road~
    Woot