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sleepless for you

I can't sleep anymore
I can't eat anymore
your ghost is hunting me
telling me to be awake
telling me to be thin

cause darling your words
slice me like daggers
like they always do
but you just don't notice
you guess I'm allright
when I haven't seen you
in like a month

but that month was
a lot of time to think
I can't stand what
you're doing to me
there is no we
we are dead

when someone you love tells you you're fat, like everyday, you just stop eating

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  • starving4perfection
    February 2

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    wow...i know how that feels....well not someone you love saying your fat but you know the overal concept i get it..and im sorry. it must be horrible expecially if its someone you love
    great write anyway though! xxx


  • black-tears
    January 4
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    thank you


  • broken-angel
    January 4
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    love this x