"Go away child I'm very busy".
Some new beau had come on by,
so I dreamed in field of clover,
till hand and tongue lashed out
when night usurped the azure sky.
A contest entry
- 30-40 words of Brilliance #48 by Aussie Gypsy.
550 points, ended January 16, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Very well written, it is sometimes hard to escape to the world outside what we are living, how I wish we all could again. Best to you in the contest
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Depth in messaged versed metaphores.Even the thief of night can steal freedoms away. Very strong tale expressed here in short verse.
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