Sun shines bright,
heating drenched earth.
My heart gives off steam
as do leaves.
Slowly the world begins
to dry
and heal.
[But] the marks of pain are left forever.
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Prompt:
Option 3
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A contest entry
- 11/30/30 Quickie by AngelKat42.
725 points, ended January 4, 2009, 7 entries
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This is a very nice take on the prompt that you have chosen good luck to you in the contest best wishes always be well.
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I find your take on this prompt interesting. I like it. I really like the last line. I used to think that time erased the pain. but it doesn't always, it lessens it.. but its like burned into our hearts, our souls. if it does eventually leave, the memory stays.
the imagery is excellent, and again I do like your take.
good luck
kat
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My heart gives off steam
as do leaves
that's beautiful!
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a great take on the promt good luck inthe contestmaralisa
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I would never have seen option 3 this way but thank you for sharing your point of view with us, and best wishes in this contest.
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It is hard to erase the pain it is forever etched in our souls, perfectly penned. Best to you in the contest
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An interesting take on the prompt.
Best of luck to you with it.
Riftkin
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