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Top secret!!!

Can it be only eighteen months ago?
It seems as though I've known you all my life
I know we've watched each other's talents grow
I've seen you bloom and fight against the strife

Can I have known you such a little time
And yet today you're such a needed friend
You knock the spots off poetry and rhyme
And weave such mysteries of let's pretend

I know that you are twenty nine today
But rest assured the secret's safe with me
I'd never give such confidence away
Though sometimes things slip out in poetry

You're climbing fast and heading to the top
But know one thing, I'll never let you stop!



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Sue Cardwell is 29 today!!!


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  • moonbumps silver member
    January 4

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    Suz will love this poem as much as I do-may she keep going and don't you stop either cos you both inspire me-
    Bumps xxx


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    January 4
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    (not really)

  • Mairi bheag gold member
    January 4

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    ... in which case, it's a pile of rubbish!


  • Amera gold member
    January 4

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    Aww... I guess you let the secret out but you did it for a wonderful and loving person. We all love her Jeff. Great tribute to a great poetess.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Gwenevere
    January 4

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    Lovely poem.I see how your friendship blossoms on these pages of AP.I wish you both the best of luck in your writings in 2009.Happy Birthday Sue , Ros

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