perfect knots and broken vases

you were leafing through the complete guide to rope techniques

i was looking for stray pieces of love

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prompt: rope

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Mairi bheag
January 6

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This is actually quite a remarkable piece of writing. The starting-place of an unequal relationship... I find myself wondering: "And what? The relationship petered out? They fell in love and lived happily ever after?" The fact that I do that means you have engaged a reader with a couple of laconic sentences.
HereComesTheSun
January 6

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wow this was amazing. i mean really you write such amazing lines that are just wow. though i say add on to it tell a story its like you gave a preview and now i want the whole show :]
ps good luck in the contest (not that you ever need luck)
Malabu
January 6

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its short and simple...and says alot,
what came to my mind;

i was looking for stray pieces of you

great piece
mal
mysticstorm
January 5

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Completely captivating and moving...very creative in brevity...truly loved it...

thank you for entering.

mystic
divebar
January 5
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hmm. im not so sure about the stray pieces of love, but rope is a weird prompt. so whatever.
Jersene
January 4
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succinct and superb
Rowan
January 4
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excellent...