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He is

 

 

 

 

an orchid petal with delicate veins

fluttering in early morning light

 

a cooing infant who suddenly sneezes

to an adoring mother’s surprise

 

golden plains of summer wheat

swaying in a lazy breeze

 

the faint whisper of coming autumn

through rustling leaves

 

somber moments that envelope souls

as they shed bitter tears of grief.

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt: Describe God.

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    January 6

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    Sigh.. I don't think anyone has ever brought God alive for me more than you have with this write MJ!!

    Beautiful!


  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 4

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    Such beautiful imagery and thoughts...he is this and so much more...amazing how we all view and think of him...well done!

    Best to you.

    mystic


  • Amera gold member
    January 4

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    Wow! This is great! LOL, as I was reading it, this came to mind.
    "Rain drops on roses, wiskers on kittens, bright copper kettels and warm woolen mittins"

    Great work!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Nicolette gold member
    January 4

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    Yes, he is all of this ... simply lovely poetry and what wonderful visuals here.

    Best wishes to you for 2009.

    ~ Nicolette