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Searching.

Missing image
In the midst of a thousand whispers                                                   
she reached out
searching for forgotten love.

But touched only mist.

Author notes

Picture credit: Auditorium for Souls by rosiehardy @ flickr

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  • EndlessNameless
    January 7

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    your words were beautiful. in my opinion you painted the picture perfectly. i could feel the sorrow in the picture. great job.


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    January 7
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    Nicely done. Congratulation on the silver.


  • Walk-Free
    January 7

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    This was brilliant.

    It shone in its simplcity, yet you brought out a hauntingly beautiful story of lost love.

    thanks and all the best