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Forevermore.

You are my only life-line;

                                         

                          Imperfection bound me to you.



A singular conclusion;


        ...Forevermore, I am yours.



[Melodious hymns enchant.]

A contest entry

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 5
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    Very creative and moving...
    well written in style and depth...

    thank you for sharing!

    mystic