i’m in a bookstore
drowning for a stretching moment
in the tales (chasing tails -
isn’t that what we’re all doing?)
until bodily aches
(persistent reminders that,
in spite of all evidence to the contrary,
i am, in fact, alive)
force my attention elsewhere...
[enter Act II]
SCENE: a dirty restroom,
cold and smelling of piss.
everywhere are impressions;
flamenco guitars, middle-class pseudo-intellectuals
(be my friends, we can all have a mental circle jerk
and oh, aren’t we lovely???)
“See anything you like?”
(the girl behind the glass case.
open, exposed, at a word,
the images that [youspreadbeneathme] thrill through my brain)
“just the ciabatta, please.”
because, frankly…
there isn’t really anything else here.
Author notes
There is no Go- er, spoon.
A contest entry
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Comments
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This is so dry, cynical and sarcastic. I adore it.
I especially liked this from "[enter Act II]" onwards.
"middle-class pseudo-intellectuals" would have to be my favourite part, though.


