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candid(acy)




i’m in a bookstore
drowning for a stretching moment
in the tales          (chasing tails -
                            isn’t that what we’re all doing?)
until bodily aches
    (persistent reminders that,
    in spite of all evidence to the contrary,
    i am, in fact, alive)
force my attention elsewhere...


[enter Act II]
SCENE: a dirty restroom,
cold and smelling of piss.

everywhere are impressions;
flamenco guitars, middle-class pseudo-intellectuals
    (be my friends, we can all have a mental circle jerk

    and oh, aren’t we lovely???)


“See anything you like?”

              (the girl behind the glass case.

                                    open, exposed, at a word,

              the images that [youspreadbeneathme] thrill through my brain)





“just the ciabatta, please.”


          because, frankly…

there isn’t really anything else here.


Author notes

There is no Go- er, spoon.

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  • Chainsaw
    January 5

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    This is so dry, cynical and sarcastic. I adore it.

    I especially liked this from "[enter Act II]" onwards.

    "middle-class pseudo-intellectuals" would have to be my favourite part, though.