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Goddess of Death

Ever slowly fading


The dense mist lifts


The white gowned goddess of death


Taking spirits, leaving empty chairs.

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Picture credit: Auditorium for Souls by rosiehardy @ flickr

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  • Walk-Free
    January 7

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    my favourite line was "Taking spirits, leaving empty chairs".

    it just encapsulated the story behind the picture so well

    great job!


  • Rya
    January 6

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    sounds like a dream i frequently have...i could see the relation to the piece and the pic...i liked it...short and sweet...good write...keep on writing...and thanks for commenting on mine...hope you will read more

  • SurvivalLiesWithin
    January 5
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    Interesting take on things . . .