Love frayed at the ends
where hearts once met
leaving fibers of marriage
upon ruffled sheets
of a wife’s infidelity
Author notes
20 words
Prompt ~ Rope
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 14 entries 20 words or less by mysticstorm.
600 points, ended January 5, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Humm..this is very practical to make a view..and to some extent very true as well..the view is sketched with a strong penning though..well done..
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oh this is good!
glade to see it with a trophy
well done
mal
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frayed... i love that word and you used it beautifully in this short write.
congratulations on the silver (:
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great work in brevity...it is a very strong Ouch!
Creative and brillant!
Thank you for sharing.
mystic -
o.O ~
Darkly engrossing for the woman who did the naughty and now must pay the price!
Love it
It never amazes me though how many women I've seen and men ... cheat on their husbands/wives and when the other half demands a divorce the cheater is almost always surprised and wants to know why? Dumbasses.
Anyway! I loves this
Best of Luck
♥
Stay safe
Love to You
~Manda
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For some reason i felt an "Ouch" with this write,
you never need to say much to get your message across, so well done dude
All the best to you in the contest
Ken
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I really like your write. Good luck in the contest.
Laura
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great alliteration in this short piece~ well done.
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You have selected a wonderful 20 words for this prompt. I enjoyed the imagery. Best of luck in the contest.
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Just brilliant! Deep, powerfully penned and brilliant!
Best wishes with this. Buit I don't think you need it.
Gaylene
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short and sweet
i've never been married but i've never read heartbreak described as you have here!! kudos, i hope you win the contest!!!!
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