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Tighter


                          frozen by his gaze

                            dangling like a puppet

                              gathering strength within her

                                his choice becomes demanding

                                                  her
                                                      rope
                                                        squeezes
                                                                tighter.
                             

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Word Prompt: ROPE
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  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 5

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    Ouch! Control can be a rope tightening daily around ones neck...nicely done...

    thank you for sharing!

    MYSTIC


  • Maxboy gold member
    January 4
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    Very nice take on the prompt neighbor.

    Best wishes in the contest