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God.

Ordinary faces,
That tend to the broken
For no reason and for every reason
Because they found it to be
The best feeling in the world.
They know nothing for certain,

Except for loving,
                  they know of that.

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I hope that I pulled it off. And I truly do believe my words that God is the people who help others who really need it and who don't, either way those are the people who create,and not destroy.

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  • Denerica
    January 10
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    He is love...and His commandment...so yes you pulled it off. Blessings.

  • Thank you for entering my contest. In youth on wednesday we were talking and I just started thinking that God is love. Anywhere there is love there is God. Great write!

    ♥ meg