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The Night

Amongst

twinkling stars

there's hope

 

Morning time

 comes

 rolling in
painting

rainbows

 across

the

skies

 

Feeling

gloomy

 about

nighttimes

departure


I glance at you

and

see your beauty


The night is over

but it left a song


and the memories will go on...

Author notes

Background thanks to Maatkara

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  • islekine silver member
    January 20
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    Lovely write...and background!

    Best wishes always...
    write on!


  • Flowergirl
    January 11

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    very nice and even warming i love it i like the end the best and the memories will go on..... very nice i love it keep up the great work


  • docbill gold member
    January 4
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    "Morning time comes rolling in painting rainbows acress the skies"

    Great visulaization!


  • Joseph G. Hollis
    January 4

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    Beautifully written and touching. This sounds like a lovely night.

    "The night is over
    but it left a song"


  • HpWICKEDangel
    January 4
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    so heart felt.

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