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The Rope Intices Me

The rope entices me doesn't want me to live
My heart and soul it does give
I die now

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    January 9

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    Ooh,,,,dark....pain.....don't want to go near this one..For a contest, you portray feelings of helplessness....no way darkness!


  • spideracer gold member
    January 8
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    Short poem that says a lot in three lines, powerful emotions of ones desire to die.


  • Draig aine gold member
    January 7
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    sad


  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 5

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    Strength in brevity...very dark and sad...

    creative use of the prompt...

    thank you for sharing...

    mystic


  • SilentTearsOnceMore
    January 4

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    Oo i like this one Great job

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