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Twining Threads.


Twining threads,
binding broken promises into thickened cord.
Strong enough to carry the weight.
With enough rope.


To hang myself.


         
               

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Prompt: ROPE

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 5

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    Very moving and chilling...a wonderfully moving take on the prompt...well done...

    thank you for sharing.
    mystic


  • Cup-a-Joe
    January 4
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    ****

    Oh this is kind of thrilling to read, esp. when you get to the end. But over broken promises?
    Joe


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    January 4
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    An excellent take on the prompt with very vivid imagery.
    Best wishes with this.
    Gaylene


  • Ademon
    January 4

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    Chilling

    and a delightful read, I saw this prompt and was heading the same direction you did with this, but decided not to write! I wish you the best in your contest!