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Command Me

 

 

 

Tie me

leave me hanging

upside down

 

have your way

with me

 

make me

surrender to you

 

my erotic master

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

20 Words
Prompt: Rope
BG by Riftkin

A contest entry

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 5
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    Erotic with a twist...Nice!

    Thank you for sharing...

    mystic

  • Bruce silver member
    January 4

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    Nice! The part that most interested me was your experimentation with line endings, which I thought enhanced the effectiveness of the piece.


  • hotchocolate gold member
    January 4

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    Hee Hee I like this here hon! Good luck to you in the contest


  • Ademon
    January 4

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    haha so perfectly true to most...to be taken by our master and have them have their way with us...beautiful!!!