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Animal Insticts

Anxiously waiting, wanting to talk
thoughts of him create an adrenal rush
a perfect high, like a roller coaster.

You check every few minutes
So you won't miss a moment
Time is precious and running out.

He finally appears, no longer hidden
and your heart beats faster, racing
possibly skipping one or two.

As you catch your breath
and calm yourself, you say hi
and begin to converse.

He says the littlest things
and they will send your pulse sky high
your mind and soul and body ache
longing for him at your side.

You look at his picture, his facial expression
his deep dark brown eyes penetrating through you
that little crooked smile on his face
the one that you cant help but smile back at

Thinking of his gentle warm touch on your skin
your mind goes blank, and you lose all focus
he would bring you close and hold you tight.
and shower you with a fervor of small, light kisses

You would try to keep yourself calm
but you'd be intoxicated by him
passion and eagerness build within you
you imagine what it would be like to be with him

Your thoughts run wild.



Animal instincts control your actions.

Author notes

thats how it is with me, just so you know. you said you get to know me better through my poetry. sry i just cant help myself (age 17)

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  • Green Lady
    February 14

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    so you went from internet fantasy
    to the actual thing?
    the last two stanzas were a litle awkward but if you went with the fantasy idea it might work better