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Don't Lie

"Every time you lie you give the devil a ride on your tongue."

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  • Kuranya gold member
    January 10, 2009

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    Wow what a great saying this is and very true too, what a wise woman she was. Best to you in the contest


  • ea silver member
    January 5, 2009
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    well, that certainly is an interesting one - food for thought and very graphic imagery!


    • Mary O gold member
      January 5, 2009
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      Thank you, I've passed it down to my grandchildren as well. Classic the looks I get as they contemplate the image.
      ~Mary O