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Back Into Your Arms

 As a child, with tender heart

Trusting, believing from the start

 

Couldn't do without you then

Finding I still need you again and again!

 

Knowing your love as in you came

At my invitation, into my life to reign

 

A loving relationship, king yet my friend

Patience enduring with me again and again!

 

As lambs and the sheep  need to keep close

To their master obeying and making the right choice

 

Finding your forgiveness is what I need,

When sin overwhelms me, for your blood I plead

 

There is a love greater than any other

Of husband or wife, sister or brother.

 

I look into your eyes as I crawl upon your knee

Remembering  a little girl who said yes when

                      she was three.

 

 

 

 

Always remembering the very happy day

When you came into my life to stay!

 

 

 

Author notes

Childhood memories at age five and younger...I was five when I asked Jesus into my heart....How well I remember...I mention three as it had to rhyme, but I do remember early days.. Life is a journey of memories...some good and some not so good...But the fellowship of the Holy Spirit through it all has been most precious! God bless you....hope you enjoyed!

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  • blood.stained.tears
    April 29

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    great poem, it was a nice way of discribing the need we have for god with out actually saying the word god in the poem even once. i like it when people can write so that we know what they are talking about with out it being so well so obvious, its like what mark twain said "I learned long ago never to say the obvious thing, but leave the obvious thing to commonplace and inexperienced people to say."
    that is what i thought of it, it was good.


  • HalfWayToNothing
    February 20
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    this is beautiful
    it sings to me
    =]


  • Xianaria gold member
    January 24
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    Thank you ~
    Nice rhyme & flow, I enjoyed the message within.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    January 7
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    Thank you luv!

    For your warm encouragement, Desire...Thank you...Sweet friend..it is good to write a poem like this. One needs to get their perspective in order..I do thank you so much....You always so encouraging... Rosemary


  • Desire gold member
    January 7
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    Oh My Word~



    Holy Moly You have swelled my eyes and salted diamonds fall~ Precious piece this is Beautiful and so touches deep~Tight rhyme too
    Powerful message~ Love this!!
    Bravo!!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Desire gold member
    January 4

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    Holy Moly~

    Okies me come back to inhale
    If You could send me linky when it is done~
    that would be super

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