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Everything has a price

Your perfection you flaunt
so openly does it taunt
us mere mortals not
flitting that slot
but I know your perfection
is open to subjection
because such
beauty, all too much,
does come with a remand
only its holder can understand.

Author notes

Prompt: http://theta-rose.deviantart.com/art/asymetrical-butterfly-87633257

And it appears dorky me has forgotten to write the purpose of the poem in here... So anyway BeautifulMelancholy I wrote this poem to show you that I would like to be your pet hamster or some such seeings that you already have too many sisters.

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  • ZachP
    January 4
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    What a beautiful little nugget of truth.

    And welcome to the family