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Lost Friend x

I first met you in high school
and then i thought that
we'd be friends forever
but it seems now we were
never meant to be together.

I really thought you were real
i never thought you'd leave
i thought you'd never change
that i really truely believed.

Looks like i was wrong again
people always leave me in the end
cause none of them were real
they werent really my friend.

Now you've left me forever,
and i still cry myself to sleep,
cause it was all my fault,
our friendship you didnt want to keep.

A contest entry

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  • starving-to-survive
    January 4
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    :'( this is so sad. Yet again another master piece. I am so sorry you have had such heart ache. It breaks my heart. You have so much talent. Brilliant poem with such intense emotion. Im always here for you babe, and i aint ever ever gnna leave yew xxxxxxxxxxxxxx


  • Kathraina silver member
    January 3

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    Perfect for contest love the flow and such a sad story that hits home! wonderful job and good luck in the contest, you have a good chance of winning

    ♥ Kathraina