A night of pleasure started out as fun
I never expected that he could be the one
We had laughed and teased the whole night through
I didn’t think would end as just me and you
The moment your hand touched my skin
I couldn’t wait for it to really begin
Touching, teasing, intense meeting of eyes
The playmate status quickly dies
The torturous wonder as you bought me to the peak
The wanting fulfillment, your body I seek
Not hurried in pleasure, you took your time
But I needed to feel your body joined to mine
Slowly, gently you entered me deep
Tears of joy from my eyes did seep
Moving as one, age old rituals dance
Upon my soul you will now prance
Pulling out and backing away
You knew I would beg you back to stay
My soul handed over to you in trust
My body explodes with your every thrust
Sensations abound when you scream out with pleasure
Laying, curled within your arms in leisure
My mind is shattered, feelings abound
Hoping again that you’ll come back around
A contest entry
- !!!!*Making Love Intensely*!!!! by ForeverLastingComa.
490 points, ended February 22, 55 entries
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This is so beautiful and intense I loved it.
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This was very intense. Making the reader able to feel all that you were experiencing.. It was amazing how you were able to do a perfect rhyme without force and enabled to piece to flow easily.
Good luck in the contest.
Soulful Woman
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Nice!! good rhyming couplets of making love. Good imagery and descriptive lines. Good luck in the contest.
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ops forgot the chapies
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Wonderfully penned my sister
I always love your style
Good Luck
Roses to you
Teresa
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