Under night's caress we meet
For eachother's hearts we seek
The fruit of our love and passion
Are upheld in unruly fashion
When we are apart
The loneliness starts
Our love will never sway
Is all that we can say
I give you my everything
Its yours for the taking
You give me your love
All that I asked of
We stand together
Our hearts drifting like feathers
And we are lost in eachother
Our love a bonded tether
_under nights shadow we surrender to intoxicating bliss
_every touch stamped with a kiss
Author notes
umm..well i chose the pic as my option, and well...hope you guys like it, i know its not my usual write... 
♥ Kathraina
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Quite romantically written, you really set a very intimate scene here!
Great job and thanks for etnering -
This is a very passionate piece and I enjoyed reading t very much. The form is fun and the picture fits perfectly.
Good job, good luck, and keep up the great writing!
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i like this, i like this alot, very deep the picture adds a thousand words.
thank you and good luck
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I like the passion and the expressions you use in this poem.
"_under nights shadow we surrender to intoxicating bliss
_every touch stamped with a kiss"
I loved this line.
A very beautiful write. Thank you for the entry and good luck.
Ronin -
I like the passion and the expressions you use in this poem.
"_under nights shadow we surrender to intoxicating bliss
_every touch stamped with a kiss"
I loved this line. A very beautiful write. Thank you for the entry and good luck.
Ronin -
i like the passion behind it,
very good
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