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Ripping Me Apart Slowly


Ripping me apart, slowly

Taking my heart and squeezing it until there’s nothing left.

Captivating my self-esteem and slaughtering it…killing it with an instance.

Lying to me, right in front of my face. Telling me how far you’d go, just to finish my race.

Telling me only what I want to hear, not the cold truth.

Hitting me! Throwing me up against the wall…

Raping me, telling  me I like it, and its some game.

Ripping me apart slowly…

Telling me this is life’s game.

Making me believe I’m just a lame.

Author notes

It doesn't flow very well but I hope I put enough passion
and dept in this.
Please tell me what you think.
I can eccept critizim.

*Its about how some people blame themselves
for abuse when Its the other persons'*

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