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dance in freedom

Missing image
peacock dancing
in silent  back ground;
on lonely rock,
all alone
without looking for applause,
spectacle so grand,
evening stars hastened
their arrival,
reserving seat on firmament
anxious,
to have clear view

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  • they do make

    all peacocks look proud, nice picture to go with the poem, like the natural feel of this, thank you for this entry,
    good luck
    Sparks