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Garden

A world of soft colours
A peaceful place for thoughts
An azure sky blazes overhead
Listen to the birds chatter.

Enticing smells beckon me to the garden
I fall deeper and deeper under the spell
Enchanted and entranced by the beauty
Everlasting and eternal, never to die or fade.

Exotic flowers bend in the breeze
Bees gather around to take their fill
My world now an explosion of colour
Like wine splashing across the stars.

My eyelids droop and start to close
The cool breeze gently rustles my hair
Whipping the leaves into a daring dance
Slowly, I slip away from the dream.

But the garden never disappears
It's always with me, always here
All I have to do is open the gate of dreams
And there it is, waiting for me.

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MY FIRST EVER PROSE!
Please let me know how I did! I'm not quite sure if I like it yet

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  • Thank you for your wonderfully penned entry, you did very well and can be proud of your effort, good luck in my contest, Josie