watching time as it seems to stop
wondering whats going to happen
while your brain feels like it is slowing down
sighing until you see the distant sky changing
its tone while the choas of no time
doesnt show what time really should be
trying to figure out what will happen
while there are only small clues to show that
there really is some ways to tell time changes
if time has frozen or it might have been your
own mind that has been stopped
Author notes
hope the contest works
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A contest entry
- 12 hour contest by sideways hourglass.
400 points, ended January 4, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think of it i think i maybe should change it
Comments
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this one sounds like that of life and love. (standing there watching the time slip because your feeling low, however dont stay to long or you shall miss loves show.) sry bout that got lost for a lil, i like your work. ill stop by often.
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great read my fav. part is
"until you see the distant sky changing
its tone while the choas of no time
doesnt show what time really should be"
keep up the good work ^_^
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