There are all sorts of sayings
about how things fit together,
“Hand and glove”
"Ham and eggs”.
But how do we fit together,
you and I?
Forget about yin and
yang.
I am the tears that fall
for your pain,
you are the sand that holds my sea,
and I am the front side to your
flip side.
You are the blossom
for which I bud,
I am the rocks that form your rapids.
Throughout the days
and nights of our life,
I am the journey.
You are the first step.
A contest entry
- Give me your Romantic poetry. by trekkergirl.
550 points, ended November 26, 53 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Trophy PW by Rhythm Child.
400 points, ended October 22, 53 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh this is lovely!!
I love this:
"I am the rocks that form your rapids."
love the ending...
Well deserving of gold!
Khia
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Excellent
What a terrific write. So very deserving of the gold. Congratulations.
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I am the tears that fall
for your pain,
I am the journey.
You are the first step.
My favourite lines...
Oooh this writing has me all shivery! Excellent stuff here...
From someone who obviously knows how to love.
Excellent write, I think.
Thank you for sharing! -
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great end!
this has a really nice flow to it
I like this lots
new twists on old cliches (referring to hand and glove ham and eggs)
cool -
I really do like this very much! I like your words. I like your creativity in your write. You use imagery well. Flows well. Great write in my opinion. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it into my contest.
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