I look around this
beautiful place
And all I know is
I'm blessed by God's grace
The shades of green
To the sunset in the sky
The purity of snow
And I wonder why?
The beauty found
In the desert heat
The simplicity of
A stream so petite
The aroma found
In a red rose
And the thorns that bring pain
Only God knows
The sand between my toes
As the waves crash
The roughness of
A volcanoes ash
The beauty surrounds us
Each and every day
Just appreciate it
Don't delay
Author notes
Everything is so beautiful and the small parts of nature can make ur day!
-God is my reality
A contest entry
- Easy quickie ♥ by Kathraina.
965 points, ended January 4, 26 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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i am glad you are hosting a contest cuz it gave me a chance to see you were on here there are so many people it is sometimes hard to find people whos writing u like i am enjoying every piece of yours i have read so much so i have added you to my favs i hope you write forever
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Love your imagery, and earthy love of nature here, and your thankful attitude closes off the poem so beautifully..
Mom
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Love This Poem !
I am really impressed with this poem, As well as your age. Your writeing is so very loving, mature, & Full of deep Expressions. I Love that you have told that God our creator is the one that gives us everything that we have , Need, As well as our wants, that we really do not need!!! I enjoyed reading this entire poem for to see things through your eye's in this poem. If I were to be Blind , I would be able to see in my mind a beautiful pictue, Just from your word's all alone by them selfs.....And all I know is that I am blessed with God's Grace,The shades of green, To the Sonnet in the sky, The purity of the snow, The aroma found, In a Red Rose. & Just appreciate it, Don't delay. These are some of my favorite parts in this poem you have written here to me I see a real masterpeice in this one !. Keep Writeing Your poetry ! For you are doing a wonderful job at and with it !!!!Blessings Be to And With You Always. Brenda Gae -
I love this piece! God trully has blessed us with amazing things, one of the most being nature
You reflect that so well in this piece. Flows well, imagery is fantastic, and rhyme is superb! Great job and good luck in the contest!
♥ Kathraina
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