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our love!

Now flowers not bloomed
door to the  heart not opened
love in autumn stroke?

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  • Harrisham Minhas
    January 17

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    Thanks for your entry:

    "Now flowers not bloomed
    door to the heart not opened
    love in autumn stroke?"


    Nicely done.

    Thanks again.

    Harrisham Minhas