liquid velvet
softly stroked
until sullen sweat
slides unbidden
from the creases
amorphous light
burning slowly
lifts up the
grand cradles
trembling with
ecstatic delight
tepid vapor
crystallizing
then melting
dripping down
the swollen
edges of
this
seam
solid core
firmly rooted
still exuding
the bare
essence of
potential
life
light
melts
vapor
cloth
grabs
core
blissful
union
Author notes
hypnorocker 1
A contest entry
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not my typical write, but do you like it?
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I do like it
Thank you for entering my contest and good luck -
This is a different style of poem. I like it, very good job! Well written, amazingly penned. Thank you for entering my contest and the best of luck goes to you.
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Very... intense. Sort of different for you, in a sense, building on an already existing viewpoint of one piece of society.
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nice
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MUCHO NICE dude man
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