There once was a boy who always laughed
who always had a giraffe
his mother always got mad
when hes always sad
so she got a staff
to make him laugh
A contest entry
- Make Me Laugh by Pollycheck.
575 points, ended January 3, 53 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make Me Laugh,Make Me cry, Or Make Me Think More Options inside!!ROUND 1 by Sheilasbabygal4life.
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Alrighty then. Thanks for entering and best of luck!
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Lovely, this is like written for me
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haha. Do you mean like a sorcerers staff? Pretty poem!
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Thanks Lisa! This is very nice. I noticed one typo in the 4th line: I think you mean he's, the contraction for "he is". I hope you keep writing.
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lmao..this is really gd it is a simple rhyme that makes ppl laugh..gd job and keep writing.
"when hes always sad" this line doesn't make sense to r u trying to say "he was always sad"
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Thank you for enteing my contest. This poem is very well written and I really enjoyed reading it. Keep writing my young poet friend.
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