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(draft) Brain's discourse.

Pulled the wool over my eyes,
But then again, that's no surprise,
Tricked me once, and you'll do it again,
Can't get it right, when it comes to men.
Stupid, it was stupid, brainless
But I knew it wouldn't be painless.
Tripped that spark
Made your mark.
Made yourself known
but your influence has grown
Causing carelessness on my part
No, I'm not in control anymore,
It's you my Heart.


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  • januaryrain gold member
    January 5

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    Your heart sounds like mine, foolish, when it comes to love.
    I love the rhyme, you do it so well. The flow was great.
    Excellent.