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Davey Jones Locker

Davey Jones locker is lost under the sea
Crashing waves and sea serpents
Preserve the precious chest with unrelenting oceans swirl.

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  • Blossom Fairy
    January 4

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    OOOOoooooooo I like this so much, good poet who is now a pirate and as such knows all about the ocean!


  • Emerald Lass
    January 4

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    Wonderful ocean adventure and dramatic imagery, and I love it! Ah, the sea serpents is such a fine touch and really sets this poem off well.


  • Antipodi
    January 3

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    Aye raise me forearm and wassel me tie dont know what I'm saying but it sounds like apple pie ..gr8 write Matee