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You

When I look into your eyes
I see my heart.
It's hidden behind your eyes
and is safe.

I know you'll keep it,
for now and forever.
I wouldn't let you have it,
if I knew you would break it.

It's as though
I would die
without you by my side,
forever I'm yours.

If something would happen
to tear us apart.
I wouldn't make it
without you.

I wonder if you know
how much I truly love you.
You are my everything
and I don't think you even know it.

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  • trekkergirl
    January 5

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    awe now this is one sweet read. I really do like it a whole lot. I like that you have your heart hidden with your love. Good creative write you have her. Good job. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into this contest.


  • Guerrero
    January 4
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    Most of the time they dont know. Beautiful write

  • nice poem! i really enjoyed the beginning: "when i look into your eyes i see my heart" thats so cute! i also liked the ending "I wonder if you know
    how much I truly love you.
    You are my everything
    and I don't think you even know it".... i can relate to this poem
    great job! =D good luck in ur contest
    huggggggglez,
    -adria/ confuzzled-angel