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Gravity

-X-                                                           
Your heart I could hold
celebrate my steadiness,
save me from drifting into oblivion.

You kept satellite spinning
around my Sun:
spreserving my sanity
on Earth.

Lonely I cry isolation tears
plastered on two cheeks,
such a shame they're both mine.

Cutthroat catharsis as you
dump me on the bottom?

-Y-
Eternal dragging down
commemorate my fears
of detained soul glued to floor.

Beaver-like burrowing,
relentless dive.
Hauling existence into the
hot lava core.

Eloquent flight
soaring through clouds,
the whole planet is mine.

Rocking revelation as we
departed at the bottom?

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