Blinded by a feeling deep inside,
As if a core hound howls out,
I let myself join its releasing cry.
Of why I did let myself go wild,
The comfort of seeing none around,
Staring, glaring, pointing and laughing.
I do not see you so you do not
...Exist
I will dance with the rain today,
Letting it slip down my face,
As a lovers sweet light kiss.
...For he dosen't laugh
Feeling as the leafs fall down,
I used to dance with them
...Now ignored
They do not share they're color,
Or light up my face with gold,
Or if they do I wouldn't know.
Blemished Corneas
...Blinded by the life
Author notes
Prompt:
Limit: no less then 15 lines, 18 lines
Screen name: Meroza
A contest entry
- Lucky Dip Titles PIF by stargazer..
800 points, ended February 23, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well done. A great expression. Best of luck in the contest.
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Your title is "Da mihi basilia mille"
translation is "Kiss me with a thousand kisses".
You can either use the latin or the english. -
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And love of all things! But thirteen is a bad number, give me something dark, twisted and bloody! Please?
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how about "Blemished Corneas"
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That will work, thank you
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