little
electric
shocks
ran down my spine.
i crave your essence;
soft,
strong,
unlike any other.....
its only been one kiss,
but i can tell
there will be
many more
from where that came from.
A contest entry
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okay I did ask in the rules for only left align poems. I don't like poems that are all over the place. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it into my contest.
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A very cute poem indeed!
Thanks for entering! -
lovely wrtie...simple, yet honest and beautiful
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I like your form unfortunately there really isn't a lovely metaphor to bring the poem out. Thank you for entering the contest. Shancy.
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Wow, I'm in love with this poem!!
"I crave your essence"...that is exactly how I used to feel about this guy, and I could never explain it in as many words, but you expressed it perfectly! 
Thank you...abi x x x
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Wow.
Is very very good!
ittle
electric
shocks
ran down my spine.
Is my favorite part. -
love it
very visually stimulating as well as verbally
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