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Take my hand

Take my hand
Into your own
Lead me high
Lead me low
Just a moment
By your side
Will bring happiness untold
Hold my hand
And squeeze it tight
Never ever let me go
For I know
I have been blind
For I know
I have been wrong
Lead me through
Deep troubled waters
Lead me through a life
Of strife
Take my hand and squeeze it tight

Take my hand

Oh, dear Lord.

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  • campanaro silver member
    March 8

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    That is simply beautiful

    This is very very nice.
    It is not the sorta poem one can read
    through in a hurry.. If you do so much is missed.
    Wonderful.Wonderful.
    Thank you for sharing this.
    Best
    Love Peace
    campanaro


  • spirit rising
    March 1
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    beautifull. x

  • amysticwriter silver member
    January 17
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    Beautiful...


  • Sandygram silver member
    January 9
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    So Uplifting

    This was such a pleasure to read this morning,. Your uplifting poem was just what I needed to read. I think we all have been blind to His love when things go wrong but that is when we need He most and should reach ouit to Him. Thank you for sharing and best of luck. Take care.

    Peace and Grace,
    Sandy


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 9

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    You are very straight while defining the self and its wishes for HIS blessings..well thought poetry is here...well done ...


  • BonnieQ silver member
    January 6

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    Great Prayer!

    This is beautifully crafted and reflects what all Christians feel; sort of David's Psalm of "Lead me through green pastures. . . " With our hand in God's, we might stumble but we never will fall.

    As for your choice of words, I find only one that just does not fit: squish/squeeze would work better and be more in keeping with the excellent phrasing you have done throughout the lovely poem.

    Best wishes in the contest! Luv in Christ, BonnieQ


  • Denerica
    January 3
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    The words cry and out and such a surrender, humbled moment. Blessings.


  • Jalalbad gold member
    January 3
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    Lovely

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