Your days are numbered my furry friend
We will see who wins in the end
You think you can steal my bed away
Getting rid of you would make my day
They see not how you treat me
Please just leave me alone and let me be
Hair raising, hissing, long sharp claws
Fine edge teeth set in clinching jaws
If they could only see you through my eyes
Not a cute little fur ball but a devil cat in disguise
I’ll stage what a naughty cat would do
Then place all the blame on you
Heed my words you little devil cat
I will get my warm comfy bed back
My bed and extra treats too
All for me and none for you
Bad devil cat
Scat
Author notes
By:
HM
In a list
A contest entry
- THE ANIMAL WORLD by condor.
1200 points, ended January 15, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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LOVE the poem and LOVE the pic.!
You did an excelltn job of bringing such a humorous picture to life... poor doggy (cats er evil anyway
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and applause. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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this is quite good thanks for the entry
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Thank you. I'm glad that you enjoyed my write.
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This is great and funny. It should make her laugh.
Michael
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Thank you Michael for you wonderful comment. I hope she will get a giggle out of it. I'm happy that you enjoyed it.
Laura
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LOL this was brilliant, I've seen that picture so many times before, actually I have my own version of that picture, of my dog & cat with the cat doing the same thing
but i love the poem you wrote around this picture, it really sounded like the dog is talking to the cat, particularly from the way he's glaring at it - gave me a good chuckle!
thanks for entering
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lol...hehehe, cute
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I'm glad my write gave you a laugh sis. Thank you for your comment.
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If they could only see you through my eyes
Not a cute little fur ball but a devil cat in disguise
lol. I think the above line says it all. This is such a cute poem. Thanks for sharing with me.
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Hehehe!!! I'm glad that you enjoyed it sweetie. I still laugh when I read it.
Thanks for your wonderful comment.
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we have 4 cats ... they are all devils lol.
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Hehehe!!! Yes they certainly can be at times. Thank you for your comment.
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Hehe devil cat, I love it! Cats are sneaky creatures I've noticed
Have taken up the whole bed before you know it! Fabtastic piece, all the best in your contest
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Hehe. I really had fun with this one too. Thank you for your wonderful comment.
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Excellent!
This is a good one from you with some humor! I love it and good luck to you in the contest hon
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Thank you Coco I'm pleased that you found it funny. I had alot of fun with this write.
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so funny
i enjoyed this piece so much, thank you for this entry, good luck in my contest... keep sharing these cute ones with us
Sparks
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Thank you so much for your beautiful comment. I'm glad you got a chuckle out of it. Thanks again Sparks.
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Hehehe!
Yessa!
funny, and great rhyme, too.
Good luck in the contest.
Bell
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Thank you hun for the wonderful comment. I'm glad you got a Hehehe out of it. It was a fun one for me to write.
Thanks Again
Laura *smile*
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You have become very good at rhyming couplets and this poem made me smile. hehe
Love,
Amera♥
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Thank you for you warm comment. I'm glad it put a smile on your face. I had alot of fun with this one.
Love,
Laura
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you got this right!!! made me laugh out loud. wonder how in the world they got that picture?
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Thanks Rheea for your comment. I'm really glad you got a good laugh out of it. Don't know where they got the picture from but it is a cute one.
Laura
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cute poem. Devil Cat. Good name. And a good story.
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Thank you so much for your nice comment. This has been alot of fun. Good luck on the contest.
Laura
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This is sweet"Devil Cat"
Dont those darn cats just have a mind of there own??
I loved it great rhyme and your first, i think you have been secretly writing, because this is Wonderful! !!
Blessings
Rend
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Thank you very much Rend for you beautiful comment. This is my first but if Amera and Don has anything to say about it, it won't be my last. Haha
Thanks Again,
Laura
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Very good sweetie, beautiful job for your very first real poem.
Wonderful....Best wishes in the contest
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Thanks Luv,
I appreciate you support and encouragement.
Laura
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This is very funny. He sounds like he is really peeved. Funny though, when they sort things out, they cuddle! Thanks so much for entering. This was just great.
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WOW!!! Thank you so much for the honorable mention.
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Thank you Condor for your wonderful comment. I'm glad you got a laugh out of it. I really enjoyed writing it for you contest.
Laura
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I just read a couple more of yours and they were funny. You'll have to add a few more. You are a very funny person.
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Thank you so much. I've just started writing and your contest was my very first real poem. I've been on AP supporting my hubby and I guess I've gotten the bug. Check back later, I might just have a new one.
Thanks
Laura
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